not just full of holes but also really bad timecycles (which is why everything looks dark inside) like i said before bro take your time when making and always add a better timecycle
how could you not see it bro it the first part of the mlo lol … but yea … dont want to sound rude or anything … but please learn mapping before trying to make money from it … iv seen so many issues with this and the other maps you made down to the fact i wouldnt even use if they was free … like iv said to many people before … take your time … tripple check for holes , bad textures , bad timecycles , and anyother issues … iv seen alot of people that only just started mapping make a map and then released it on here for money and there not even close to being used on other servers … my suggestions would be
take your time
release a few maps free and then get some feedback and learn from it